haiku 4 U

Comment by lima on November 12, 2014 at 9:02pm

I actually don't like this very much after watching the others.  I think I am going to make a new one now.

Comment by SydTheSkeptic on November 12, 2014 at 10:23pm

If you change it, I hope you keep "a drunken serenity"- I like the feeling of it, maybe cuz I need to make it happen. ;o)

Comment by S.A. Murray on November 13, 2014 at 9:36pm

Not bad. Hope you like your next one better :)

Comment by lima on November 15, 2014 at 5:58am

i think its the music i set to it that throws me off.  :)

Comment by lima on November 15, 2014 at 5:58am

i wish there was a like button for comments by the way :)

Comment by NatureJunkie on November 15, 2014 at 3:03pm

I like "a drunken serenity" too. It's a good conjunction of syllables. And I know exactly what it means.

Comment by BlancheNoE on November 15, 2014 at 4:36pm

I like "screaming flower dreams" and the image with it.

I imagine they would scream stuff like " Oh, Yeah, just LOB my head off without a second thought Asshole.

It's not like I need a way to ingest nutrients to LIVE or anything...you think I SMELL nice ?...wish I could say the same about YOU, you microbial and virus infested nightmare..."

Comment by lima on November 16, 2014 at 4:36am

:)

Comment by lima on November 16, 2014 at 5:04am

Thank you NJ and BnoE. Blanch, your comment is a great way fo me to start off my day. Thank you. :)

Comment by ThatGirl on November 17, 2014 at 12:37pm

I prefer this one ...just the way it is...Don't overthink it, gurl! the pursuit of perfection gets us tangled up in knots everytime....go with your gut on this one...

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